How to Write Emails That Actually Get Clicked
Getting opens is just the start. Here's how to write email body copy that drives clicks, conversions, and real engagement.
Open rates get all the glory. But clicks are where the money is.
You got them to open the email. Now you have about 8 seconds to convince them to click. Here’s how.
The One-Idea Rule
Every email should be about one thing. One idea. One CTA. One desired action.
The moment you add a second CTA, you cut your click rate. Paradox of choice is real — when people have too many options, they choose none.
Structure That Converts
Hook (First 2 lines)
Your opening line has one job: make them read the next line.
Good hooks:
- Ask a question they can’t ignore
- State a surprising fact
- Call out a pain point
- Tell a micro-story
Bad hooks:
- “Hope this email finds you well”
- “It’s been a while since…”
- “In this email, I’m going to…”
Body (The meat)
Keep paragraphs to 1-3 sentences. Use white space aggressively. Write at a 6th-grade reading level.
Formatting tips:
- Bold key phrases
- Use bullet points for lists
- Break up text with subheadings
- One idea per paragraph
CTA (The close)
Make your CTA:
- Clear — they should know exactly what happens when they click
- Specific — “Download the 5-page template” beats “Click here”
- Visible — use a button AND a text link
- Urgent — give them a reason to click now, not later
The P.S. Trick
Always add a P.S. line. It’s the second most-read part of any email after the subject line.
Use it to:
- Restate your CTA differently
- Add a bonus or incentive
- Create urgency
- Share a personal note
Tone Matters
Write like you’re emailing one person, not a list. Use “you” more than “we.” Be conversational. Read it out loud — if it sounds like a press release, rewrite it.
The best email copy doesn’t feel like marketing. It feels like a message from someone who gets it.